When every competitor describes itself with the same words, I want to say what makes us different, so buyers have grounds to choose rather than only compare price.
Khi mọi đối thủ đều mô tả mình bằng những từ giống nhau, tôi muốn nói được công ty mình khác ở đâu, để người mua có cơ sở chọn thay vì chỉ so giá.
Job context
- Who
- A marketing lead in a crowded market
- When
- When rewriting the homepage or sales material
- Trigger
- Placing your page beside a rival's and not being able to tell them apart
- Situation
- What is genuinely different usually does not sound impressive
- Constraints
- Cannot claim what the product does not do, and leadership wants it to sound big
5 Pains
Every company uses the same vocabulary
HighTrusted, dedicated, professional — three words that exclude nobody.
Root cause: Any word safe enough to use is a word anyone can use
The real difference sounds trivial
High"We reply within two hours" sounds weaker than "world-class service" and means far more.
Root cause: Specificity excludes, and exclusion feels risky
Leadership wants the message to cover everything
MediumEach department adds a phrase and the message loses every edge.
Root cause: Messaging is approved by consensus, and consensus sands off specificity
Does not know how customers see the difference
HighThe reason customers chose is usually not the reason the company believes.
Root cause: Nobody asks customers why they chose this rather than that
Any difference is copied within months
MediumAn effective positioning line appears on a rival's page quickly.
Root cause: Words are copyable; the capability behind them is not
5 Desired Outcomes
Know the real reason customers chose them
FunctionalSay something specific a rival cannot
FunctionalKeep the specificity through internal approval
SocialDifferentiate on capability rather than wording
FunctionalStop seeing their page as identical to every other
Emotional
5 Existing Solutions
A solution is not the same thing as a product — a customer can hire a behaviour or a workaround too.
Interview customers who bought
BehaviourThe only source that knows the real reason, requiring time nobody grants.
A competitor comparison table
ProductForces specificity, with every cell scored by oneself.
Hire a positioning consultant
ServiceBrings method; the answer still has to come from your own customers.
State a number instead of an adjective
WorkaroundThe writer's own defence against vagueness, because approval always pulls toward it.
Ask lost prospects why they chose elsewhere
BehaviourThe sharpest positioning information and the hardest to obtain.
2 Opportunity Gaps
Specificity excludes part of the market, and nobody in the approval chain wants to own the excluded part.
Why existing solutions fail: The risk of an excluding sentence appears in the room, while the cost of a vague one is spread across the market and owned by nobody.
Potential opportunity: Deciding in advance who is not a customer, as a separately approved document.
The only people who know why they chose you are the customers, and asking them is nobody's job.
Why existing solutions fail: Sales has moved to the next deal, support is running operations, and marketing was not present at the decision, so the most important question falls between three functions.
Potential opportunity: One question attached to signing, while the reason is fresh and everyone is still talking.